Is my in-game promotion system good?

Hello!

As you probably know, I have been working on my in-game promotion system (before my game broke) and I want you guys to provide some feedback on what I could improve. Here’s how to goes:

  1. The player hits “Menu”, navigates to the “Other” tab, and click on the “Advertising” button.
  2. The player is welcomed with a screen stating the terms of using the system, also reminding that the system is non-refundable and to use at their own risk. A button simply says “Buy Advertisment Subscription.”
  3. After the user buys a subsription, the game “prints” a receipt which they can screenshot and paste on the official communications server, which includes the user’s name, display name, and date of purchased subsription, therefore prooving they have bought a subscription from in-game.
  4. After purchase receipt is reviewed to make sure it isnt fake, the user may create a private ticket in the Discord server and upload an image of their advertisment. After it’s approved, they will appear in various spots in the game.

Screenshots would’ve been helpful, but, sadly, I can’t provide any at the moment :confused:

Should there be something I should add later on? Or improve? What do you think about my advertisment system so far? I would love to hear your thoughts!

-OH20

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Sooo I assume my advertisment system is okay?

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Yeah. I am so excited for the pictures soon! Do you have a game?

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Where this is in.(20)

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Yes, but it will take a few months for public release, however the alpha is available.

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May I see? (20chrafskdjgdhsjsh)

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I don’t get that …

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What game is this in?

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Northdrift County: Extreme Roleplay. Also I don’t feel like it’s right to advertise here so I guess I’ll DM information on Discord on joining the alpha and stuff.

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You can always state your group and game of someone asks for it or it’s for a post

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yep that would be annyoing if u cant

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Yea I can see how it would be annoying.

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Yep. Your defenetly right.

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My game has been fixed! I’ve managed to gather a few screenshots.

  1. Frame where you may buy the advertising subscription, along with terms and rules.

  2. When you purchase, it will load a receipt and show this frame in the meantime.

  3. Then, you get your purchase proof form which you can submit on the server. (NOTE: “Sample” is not writen in the actual frame.)

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I just need your ROBLOX username so I can grant you playing access @Robin

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robbour2 lmaoo okay add me

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You now have access to play.

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Looks sweet. Not too shabby at all.

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I think that it sounds great, but definitely has some flaws. Perhaps you could create a system that makes it send the receipt to the server through a webhook? I think that that would be a good idea.

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Hmm … possibly. But I don’t really know how to make a webhook which can make and send a receipt to a Discord server.

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